Poems...? anyone.

[Alice]

so when we have nothing to do in the night, assuming everyone else on here, is unable to sleep, write something. i right poetry and love reading it. Thats how i get through my nights... So critique, compose,complement, do whatever. i'll be posting some poems on this fourm, and would adore anyone who posted anything at all as well.

[Arismetal]

My mind is blind
my hand is dead
when i wanna to awake
just i can sleep

...

my heart does not pump
power is out
your smiles that would wind
now lies between weed

...

I try to go away
reach another place
escape from loneliness
but always have the pain
pain of knowing that you are not here

[marcelo de carvalho]

This is soo me >.<


btw, very good poem. =)

Alice said:

He has her

I am in love with a guy who doesn't know it
And that's because I’m afraid to show it
I get so jealous, he likes her instead
I hate how all this runs through my head

I want you to know you brighten my day.
Even when you stop, just to say hey.
If only you'd let me taste your sweet kiss,
I’d be the one you always seem to miss

My heart is so happy whenever you’re near,
But when you’re with her, my eyes start to tear.
I always look for you, just to see your smile
And believe me baby, it’s always worth while.

Why can’t you see my love for you?
Or can you see it, and just not know what to do.
If that’s the case I’ll give you advice…
Break up with her, she should pay the price.

By “the price” I mean, for her not really caring.
Believe me, I know, I’m always staring.
But who can blame me for staring at you?
Your looks are gorgeous, and your personality to.

I guess I’m just jealous of her
Because she’s the one you prefer
Until the time I tell you how I feel
I’ll try to let my heart start to heal.

by me.
thanks for the comment shane. cool lyrics by the way.
this is another one i wrote... its simple. but when i was writing it, it meant alot. and writing helped. i dont usually talk about my feelings. paper is my friend. and i write it into poetry.hope you like it. :D